How can this writer further develop these ideas? What should this writer do next?

THREE REASONS FOR STOPPING X

X is one of the most important problems in today’s modern society. There are three main reasons why X should be stopped. This essay will explain those reasons.

First, a lot of people X because it is the popular thing to do. They do not realize how harmful it can be in their later lives. All young people should realize that the best thing to is have fun later when it will last. Doing the popular thing now because it is fun is a big mistake, because this sort of fun doesn’t last.

Second, a lot of people don’t realize that taking the easy way now is a bad idea. The way to have a bright future that will last is to work hard now and wait until later to X. For example, Horatio Alger did not X a lot when he was young. Instead, he worked hard for a bright future, and he ended up with a wonderful family, a good job, a lot of money, and a beautiful home.

Third, the Bible says young people should not X. The Bible has been around a lot longer than those who X. If young people would be patient like Job and if they work hard like he did, they will end up with children and all the good things life has to offer.

In conclusion, I feel that people should not X. We should elect leaders and hire teachers who do not X. Because X is popular, and the easy way, and against the Bible, you can see X should be stopped.

--an example of “anti-writing,” writing reduced to a few simple rules of grammar and structure, but in which the writer is not engaged, or discovering anything, from the book, Plato, Derrida, and Writing, by Jasper Neel.